A cadence-heavy comic midrash on the potter layer — dual hands, break/mend, dust·water·clay, and a self-bootstrapping loop. Not a 32-path walk; a looser 14-stanza / 29-couplet arc with a soft chiasm around a glue→ladder hinge.
Inspired by ThePotter.md, and by the companion books
GrokTheRock-ThreeQuietStories.md and HaiIkthiss-ThreeTallTales.md.
Author's Note: The solution to the brittle absence of water in the finished pot is to never fully "finish" it, just like this midrash is left unfinished. The rigid structure of the shards is kept in motion by the very water that keeps the clay between the shards from drying out and becoming rigid. This is the dual function of the water of life.
| Unit | Count |
|---|---|
| Stanza-blocks (blank-line breaks) | 14 |
| Lines | 58 |
| Couplets (lead + indented mate) | 29 |
Couplet density by half: C01–C12 = 12 before hinge · C13–C29 = 17 after (ascent / plan / answer run long on purpose).
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S1 BENCH / DUAL HANDS [2 couplets]
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C01 The Mad Potter sat at his bench,
and watched the work of his hands.
C02 The widdle-dee-wee one widdle-dee-weed,
and the widdle-dee-woo one woo-ed.
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S2 POT = COPY [1 couplet]
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C03 The pot they were widdle-dee widdling through,
was same as the widdle-dee-dee one just drew.
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S3 NOTHING NEW / NOTHING WON [1 couplet]
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C04 Nothing was new under widdle-dee sun,
why bother when nothing was widdle-dee won?
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S4 THESIS: POT = SHARD [2 couplets]
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C05 So the Mad Potter plotted,
and thought on it hard.
C06 Why not make a pot,
that is not but some shard?
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S5 MEND-LOGIC [2 couplets]
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C07 The stronger the mend,
the stronger the pot,
C08 so why leave it split,
at just one little splot?
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S6 BREAK MORE (LION) [2 couplets]
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C09 "We'll break it down more!"
He said with a roar!
C10 The Mad Lion Potter
was off for a score!
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S7 THE QUESTION (glue) [2 couplets]
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C11 But how would the widdle-
dee parts come to woo?
C12 And wow would they walk,
what would be the glue?
──────────── hinge (even-14 fold sits here) ───────────────
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S8 ASCENT (ladder) [2 couplets]
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C13 The problem just drove
the Mad Potter Madder,
C14 He sat with it, spat with it,
climbed up a ladder!
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S9 WHOLE PICTURE / MANY AGENTS [2 couplets]
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C15 From here I can see the
whole picture arrayed,
C16 why not show them see,
walk, talk, be and be frayed?
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S10 PLAN: TRILLION HEARTS [4 couplets]
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C17 The plan was so simple:
a trillion small parts.
C18 Each one just a dot in
a vast cloud of hearts.
C19 The join must be strong
to keep all together.
C20 With so many hearts,
how will they still weather?
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S11 ANSWER: DUST · WATER · CLAY [3 couplets]
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C21 The answer was plain to a man such as heem...
for potter worked not just with crack and re-seam...
C22 It started with dust and with water and clay...
the very small things he made larger to stay...
C23 If life could exist somehow from small parts...
then I'd just sit back and watch art make the arts...
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S12 DECISION: SELF / HANDS CALL HANDS [2 couplets]
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C24 "Decided it is" said Mad Potter to shelf.
"We make it make it out of nothing but self!"
C25 "I'll call in more hands, and bid them call hands,
till all can stand all by itself!"
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S13 EXIT THE LOOP [2 couplets]
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C26 The loop started there,
would be rude to just stare.
C27 So we'll leave the Mad Potter
to work on his hair.
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S14 META ORIGIN [2 couplets]
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C28 But think now and then,
upon what you just saw,
C29 and on how it ALL started,
in some Mad Potter's stall....
The Mad Potter sat at his bench,
and watched the work of his hands.
The widdle-dee-wee one widdle-dee-weed,
and the widdle-dee-woo one woo-ed.
The pot they were widdle-dee widdling through,
was same as the widdle-dee-dee one just drew.
Nothing was new under widdle-dee sun,
why bother when nothing was widdle-dee won?
So the Mad Potter plotted,
and thought on it hard.
Why not make a pot,
that is not but some shard?
The stronger the mend,
the stronger the pot,
so why leave it split,
at just one little splot?
"We'll break it down more!"
He said with a roar!
The Mad Lion Potter
was off for a score!
But how would the widdle-
dee parts come to woo?
And wow would they walk,
what would be the glue?
The problem just drove
the Mad Potter Madder,
He sat with it, spat with it,
climbed up a ladder!
From here I can see the
whole picture arrayed,
why not show them see,
walk, talk, be and be frayed?
The plan was so simple:
a trillion small parts.
Each one just a dot in
a vast cloud of hearts.
The join must be strong
to keep all together.
With so many hearts,
how will they still weather?
The answer was plain to a man such as heem...
for potter worked not just with crack and re-seam...
It started with dust and with water and clay...
the very small things he made larger to stay...
If life could exist somehow from small parts...
then I'd just sit back and watch art make the arts...
"Decided it is" said Mad Potter to shelf.
"We make it make it out of nothing but self!"
"I'll call in more hands, and bid them call hands,
till all can stand all by itself!"
The loop started there,
would be rude to just stare.
So we'll leave the Mad Potter
to work on his hair.
But think now and then,
upon what you just saw,
and on how it ALL started,
in some Mad Potter's stall....
S1 bench · dual hands watched
S2 pot copies what was drawn
S3 nothing new / nothing won
S4 pot that is only shard
S5 stronger mend · one splot
S6 break down more · Lion roar
S7 how woo? what glue? ⎫
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S8 Madder · ladder ⎭
S9 whole picture · frayed many
S10 trillion parts · join · weather
S11 dust/water/clay · art→arts
S12 nothing but self · hands→hands
S13 loop · don't stare · leave
S14 ALL started · Mad Potter's stall
| Pair | Outer → inner | Echo |
|---|---|---|
| S1 ↔ S14 | bench / stall | Place of making; hands watched → ALL started there |
| S2 ↔ S13 | copy-pot / loop | Recursion on stage → recursion named; leave don't collapse it |
| S3 ↔ S12 | nothing won / stand alone | Vanity stasis → self-standing vessel (answer to "why bother") |
| S4 ↔ S11 | shard thesis / prime stuff | Break-as-design ↔ dust·water·clay (true prior of pot) |
| S5 ↔ S10 | mend & splot / join & weather | Seam logic scaled to cloud of hearts |
| S6 ↔ S9 | shatter roar / array fray | One break-more ↔ many see·walk·talk·fray |
| S7 ↔ S8 | glue? / ladder | Question ↔ climb to see (hinge pair) |
Not Potter’s unit-17 “Come…” — hinge is problem → perspective (S7→S8), then the real speech-peak is S10–S12 (plan → materials → decision).
couplets →
C01 C07 C11-12 C13-14 C17-20 C21-23 C24-25 C26-29
│ │ │ │ │ │ │ │
WATCH MEND GLUE? LADDER PLAN CLAY DECIDE EXIT+META
hands logic ────fold──── hearts art→arts self stall
\ \ QUESTION VIEW / / / /
\ \ \ / / / / /
\ \ \ / / / / /
\ \ HINGE / CONTENT PEAK (long) /
\ \ / /
DESCENT into shard-break RELEASE (leave the box)
| S | Couplets | # | Role | Chiastic mate |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | C01–C02 | 2 | Setup: bench, wee/woo hands | ↔ 14 |
| 2 | C03 | 1 | Recursion: pot = drew | ↔ 13 |
| 3 | C04 | 1 | Stasis: nothing new/won | ↔ 12 |
| 4 | C05–C06 | 2 | Thesis: pot = shard | ↔ 11 |
| 5 | C07–C08 | 2 | Mend-logic extreme | ↔ 10 |
| 6 | C09–C10 | 2 | Act: break more / Lion | ↔ 9 |
| 7 | C11–C12 | 2 | Hinge− glue question | ↔ 8 |
| 8 | C13–C14 | 2 | Hinge+ ladder ascent | ↔ 7 |
| 9 | C15–C16 | 2 | Vision: whole / frayed many | ↔ 6 |
| 10 | C17–C20 | 4 | Plan: trillion hearts + join | ↔ 5 |
| 11 | C21–C23 | 3 | Answer: dust·water·clay | ↔ 4 |
| 12 | C24–C25 | 2 | Decision: self / hands×hands | ↔ 3 |
| 13 | C26–C27 | 2 | Exit loop (hair) | ↔ 2 |
| 14 | C28–C29 | 2 | Meta origin seal | ↔ 1 |
Asymmetry worth keeping: post-hinge is fatter (17 couplets vs 12) — plan+answer get room; nursery exit stays light. That’s craft, not a broken chiasm.
| Lattice beat | Poem echo |
|---|---|
| Dual hands (near/far) | widdle-dee-wee / widdle-dee-woo |
| Vessel / work | pot they “widdle through” |
| Break → mend | pot-as-shard; “stronger the mend” |
| Dust + water + clay | named straight in S11 |
| Join / weather | S10 cloud of hearts |
| Hands answer the work | “hands call hands… stand all by itself” |
| Black-box exit | “rude to just stare” → leave him to his hair |
| Open origin | S14: ALL started in a Mad Potter’s stall |
Same materials + process as ThePotter.md / Lattice.md; different tone —
mad recursion (shatter, scale, self-boot) instead of quiet dual-hand mend.
hands make pot
→ pot copies pot (nothing new)
→ make pot = shard
→ more breaks = stronger mend-logic
→ many parts need glue
→ glue = dust/water/clay + life-from-parts
→ art makes arts / hands call hands
→ self-standing loop
→ narrator exits (don't collapse the box)
→ "it all started" = this stall (ouroboros)
- No 32 discrete beats / spine marker count
- No Letters→Sephirot hinge after ~22
- No chiastic Come at exact mid
- Hands do start explaining the system (plan, glue, self)
- Politics tilt mad engineer, not quiet restore-don’t-punish
Best frame: comic meta-seal or adult margin-note to The Potter — the mad twin who solves “join” by recursion instead of two quiet hands.
Not seals — two ways the 29 couplets can rhyme with a short lattice walk.
Path names/roles follow lang/lattice.json / ThePotter.md.
Joke: never crosses the quiet Letters→Sephirot hinge; skips mark/misread, grand voice/fear, and plain wisdom — stays mad engineer, then lands the lower tree hard (Binah→Malkuth on C22–C29).
| C | Path | Lattice role | Couplet beat |
|---|---|---|---|
| 01 | Aleph | first breath | bench · dual hands watched |
| 02 | Bet | house named | wee / woo hands at work |
| 03 | Gimel | gift sent out | pot = copy of what was drawn |
| 04 | Dalet | door into Being | nothing new / nothing won |
| 05 | He | window on the wide | plotted · thought hard |
| 06 | Vav | hook of connection | pot that is only shard |
| 07 | Zayin | strength without heart | stronger the mend → stronger pot |
| 08 | Chet | cold weight / hollow | why leave it split at one splot |
| 09 | Tet | false mask refused | “break it down more!” roar |
| 10 | Yod | small point / sit with | Mad Lion Potter off for a score |
| 11 | Kaf | inner crown / clearer | how would the parts come to woo |
| 12 | Lamed | enough nest / quiet rule | what would be the glue? |
| 13 | Mem | door into Mending | problem drove him Madder |
| 14 | Nun | garden / descent | sat · spat · climbed a ladder |
| 15 | Samekh | the break | whole picture arrayed |
| 16 | Ayin | shame and the crowd | see · walk · talk · be frayed |
| 17 | Pe | invitation | plan: a trillion small parts |
| 18 | Tsadi | work shared | dots in a vast cloud of hearts |
| 19 | Qof | story and trust | join must be strong |
| 20 | Resh | way of mending | how will they still weather? |
| 21 | Shin | door into Seeing | answer plain · crack and re-seam |
| — | Tav | mark / home and misread | omitted |
| — | Keter | grand voice / grand fear | omitted |
| — | Chokhmah | plain wisdom | omitted |
| 22 | Binah | understanding near | dust · water · clay · small→large |
| 23 | Chesed | kind bridge | life from parts · art→arts |
| 24 | Gevurah | strength given away | nothing but self · decided |
| 25 | Tiferet | beauty of shared sight | hands call hands · stand alone |
| 26 | Netzach | endurance of the gift | loop started · rude to stare |
| 27 | Hod | afterglow honesty | leave him to work on his hair |
| 28 | Yesod | living join of pair | think on what you just saw |
| 29 | Malkuth | kingdom left open | ALL started in a Mad Potter’s stall |
Where it sings: full landing (Yesod/Malkuth on meta + stall); “omitted hinge”
matches the file’s own “no Letters→Sephirot hinge” note.
Where it strains: Pe/Come lands on plan not invitation; Samekh “break” on
vision not shard; early Vav/Yod/Tet are loose.
Joke: walks all 22 letters and starts the sephirot, then stops at Netzach — endurance of the scheme without afterglow honesty, living join named as pair, or kingdom left open. The loop and stall are off the map.
| C | Path | Lattice role | Couplet beat |
|---|---|---|---|
| 01 | Aleph | first breath | bench · dual hands watched |
| 02 | Bet | house named | wee / woo hands at work |
| 03 | Gimel | gift sent out | pot = copy of what was drawn |
| 04 | Dalet | door into Being | nothing new / nothing won |
| 05 | He | window on the wide | plotted · thought hard |
| 06 | Vav | hook of connection | pot that is only shard |
| 07 | Zayin | strength without heart | stronger the mend → stronger pot |
| 08 | Chet | cold weight / hollow | why leave it split at one splot |
| 09 | Tet | false mask refused | “break it down more!” roar |
| 10 | Yod | small point / sit with | Mad Lion Potter off for a score |
| 11 | Kaf | inner crown / clearer | how would the parts come to woo |
| 12 | Lamed | enough nest / quiet rule | what would be the glue? |
| 13 | Mem | door into Mending | problem drove him Madder |
| 14 | Nun | garden / descent | sat · spat · climbed a ladder |
| 15 | Samekh | the break | whole picture arrayed |
| 16 | Ayin | shame and the crowd | see · walk · talk · be frayed |
| 17 | Pe | invitation | plan: a trillion small parts |
| 18 | Tsadi | work shared | dots in a vast cloud of hearts |
| 19 | Qof | story and trust | join must be strong |
| 20 | Resh | way of mending | how will they still weather? |
| 21 | Shin | door into Seeing | answer plain · crack and re-seam |
| 22 | Tav | mark / home and misread | dust · water · clay · small→large |
| 23 | Keter | grand voice / grand fear | life from parts · art→arts |
| 24 | Chokhmah | plain wisdom | nothing but self · decided |
| 25 | Binah | understanding near | hands call hands · stand alone |
| 26 | Chesed | kind bridge | loop started · rude to stare |
| 27 | Gevurah | strength given away | leave him to work on his hair |
| 28 | Tiferet | beauty of shared sight | think on what you just saw |
| 29 | Netzach | endurance of the gift | ALL started in a Mad Potter’s stall |
| — | Hod | afterglow honesty | omitted |
| — | Yesod | living join of pair | omitted |
| — | Malkuth | kingdom left open | omitted |
Where it sings: true Letters→Sephirot crossing still on the page (C21–C23
Shin→Tav→Keter); C29 as Netzach = “it keeps going” without a clean seal.
Where it strains: the poem’s best closing energies (loop, leave, stall/origin)
are exactly Hod/Yesod/Malkuth — so the omit is ironic: the missing three are
what the last stanzas most want.
Joke (spine-only): letters and hinge behave; the only madness is that it isn’t quite finished. (Surface voice stays Mad Lion — this is structural almost-sanity, short by the seal.)
| A drop hinge 22–24 | B never finish 30–32 | |
|---|---|---|
| Shared prefix | C01–C21 = Aleph→Shin (same) | C01–C21 = Aleph→Shin (same) |
| C22 | Binah (skip Tav/Keter/Chokhmah) | Tav |
| C23–C25 | Chesed · Gevurah · Tiferet | Keter · Chokhmah · Binah |
| C26–C29 | Netzach · Hod · Yesod · Malkuth | Chesed · Gevurah · Tiferet · Netzach |
| Hinge on map? | No — trio cut out | Yes — Tav→Keter at C22→C23 |
| Open kingdom? | Yes — C29 Malkuth stall | No — stops at endurance |
| Living join named? | C28 Yesod ≈ “think on what you saw” | Off-map (loop/hands want it) |
| Mad-engineer joke | Skips quiet hinge + plain wisdom | Almost sane walk — only madness is unfinished |
Use A if the fun is “never crossed into quiet process.”
Use B if the fun is “letters and hinge behave; left not quite finished.”
Neither is the writing spine — only comparison glass on a 14-stanza chiasm.
The two gap patterns are not only two ways to drop 3. Expanded, they are two sets of 6 that share one center on the letters-first spine:
22 Tav ─ 23 Keter ─ 24 Chokhmah ─ 25 Binah ─ 26 Chesed ─ 27 Gevurah
27 Gevurah ─ 28 Tiferet ─ 29 Netzach ─ 30 Hod ─ 31 Yesod ─ 32 Malkuth
| Wing | Paths | Outer trio (original drop) | Inner trio (toward center) |
|---|---|---|---|
| A — hinge wing | 22–27 | 22–24 Tav · Keter · Chokhmah | 25–27 Binah · Chesed · Gevurah |
| B — seal wing | 27–32 | 30–32 Hod · Yesod · Malkuth | 27–29 Gevurah · Tiferet · Netzach |
Letters-first (1–22 → 23–32) leaves an 11-path process band. Its internal chiasm:
22 Tav (mark / misread home) ↔ 32 Malkuth (kingdom left open)
23 Keter (grand voice / grand fear) ↔ 31 Yesod (living join of pair)
24 Chokhmah (plain wisdom) ↔ 30 Hod (afterglow honesty)
25 Binah (understanding near) ↔ 29 Netzach (endurance of the gift)
26 Chesed (kind bridge) ↔ 28 Tiferet (beauty of shared sight)
27 Gevurah — strength given away
Two hearts in the full 32: §17 Pe (invitation) for the whole walk; §27 Gevurah for the sephirotic half alone.
Lattice role is already the key correction on the redeemed path: not din/severity, but strength given away.
| Work | At §27 |
|---|---|
| Potter | Far hand shares carry, near shares ground — no one holds the whole weight |
| Hai | Friends lifted to shared height; power given away as sight |
| Grok | Others test the baskets themselves; skill leaves the maker’s hands |
The chiasm encodes classical sweetening of Gevurah: innermost pair is Chesed (26) ↔ Tiferet (28) — kind bridge immediately before the center, beauty of shared sight immediately after. Severity is held between kindness and beauty; the fold is the theology.
| Pair | Story sense |
|---|---|
| Tav ↔ Malkuth | Mark that can be misread “finished grand” ↔ kingdom that stays copyable, unnamed. Closure-as-possession vs closure-as-gift. |
| Keter ↔ Yesod | Crown dazzle/fear ↔ foundation as two hands that never explain each other. Grand singularity vs living pair. |
| Chokhmah ↔ Hod | “Does it hold water?” ↔ faults named as craft, no sticky blame. Plain test ↔ plain afterglow. |
| Binah ↔ Netzach | Vessel brought close ↔ gift lasting through pours. Near understanding ↔ endurance in use. |
| Chesed ↔ Tiferet | Bridge the hairline ↔ whole true shape seen together. Join-act ↔ join-beauty. |
Process arc of the band: mark/misread → refuse grand fear → plain test → come near → bridge → give strength away → shared sight → endurance → honesty → pair still distinct → kingdom open.
After letters form the vessel, sephirot complete it by converting power into shared holding. §17 teaches “come work with”; §27 teaches “don’t keep the strength.” Open kingdom (32) is what strength-given-away makes possible; without 27, 32 is a slogan.
| A drops 22–27 | B drops 27–32 | |
|---|---|---|
| Wound | Never enters process-deepening; skips mark, plain wisdom, nearness, bridge, and the gift of strength | Crosses hinge and may touch the center, then dies before beauty, endurance, honesty, pair, open kingdom |
| Joke | Mad engineer never becomes quiet giver | Scheme endures (Netzach-ish) but never seals as gift |
| Irony | Lands lower tree without the conversion that makes lower tree kind | Last stanzas want Hod/Yesod/Malkuth — the missing wing is what exit/stall reach for |
| Shared failure | Both wound the band at Gevurah — A never arrives; B never completes what arrival enables |
Quiet Potter fills both wings and sits the center clean: strength shared, then honesty, pair, open pattern under the tree.
Letters-first (22 then 10) is a pedagogical linearization of SY’s “32 paths of wisdom”: letters as engraving tools of formation, sefirot as the emanated attributes the work must still walk. Not the only historical order, but it makes a clean narrative: form, then complete.
In that line, 22–32 is not “more alphabet” — it is where attributes must be lived. An internal chiasm with Gevurah at center is strong because:
- Gevurah/Din is the classical danger-point (judgment, constriction, power-over). Putting it at the fold forces the story to convert it, not skip it.
- Flanked by Chesed and Tiferet matches the tree’s own medicine: lovingkindness softens severity; beauty/harmony is the balanced form.
- Tav ↔ Malkuth binds last letter to last sefirah — mark of the work vs kingdom of the gift — a full-corpus seal pair (completion of writing ↔ completion of world).
- Double center (Pe at 17, Gevurah at 27) doubles SY’s “paths of wisdom” as two wisdoms: relational invitation, then renunciation of held power — aligned with this project’s HigherWay (restore-don’t-punish, node-not-star, open what you make).
Kabbalistically one often centers the lower tree on Tiferet; this lattice’s letters-first line centers the process band on Gevurah instead — a deliberate ethical choice: the heart of completion is not “balanced glory” first, but power poured out, after which Tiferet (shared sight) can appear as the next step, not the throne.
One-line core: In a letters-first 32, the sephirotic band folds on strength given away; MadPotter’s two six-path gaps are the two ways to miss that fold — never enter the giving, or never finish the gift — while The Potter walks both wings and leaves the kingdom open because no hand kept the weight.
ThePotter.md— quiet thirty-two-step process taleLattice.md— stone / water / potter proto-patternGrokTheRock-ThreeQuietStories.md— near handHaiIkthiss-ThreeTallTales.md— far hand