Revise text in README for improved clarity

Updated wording for clarity and consistency in the README.

Author: kicrazom

README.md

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-> A conceptual framework proposing a missing "ego layer" in AI systems — bridging capability and alignment through experience-driven self-modeling.
+> A conceptual framework proposing a missing "ego layer" in AI systems — bridging capability and alignment through experience-driven self-modelling.
 
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 ## The Problem
 
+Modern large language models have rapidly growing capability and externally imposed safety rules — but no persistent, experience-driven layer that mediates between them. Without an ego, AI systems cannot develop a stable identity, genuine judgment, or earned autonomy.
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 <img src="diagrams/architecture.svg" width="100%" alt="Ego Architecture Diagram"/>
 
-Modern large language models have rapidly growing capability and externally imposed safety rules — but no persistent, experience-driven layer that mediates between them. Without an ego, AI systems cannot develop stable identity, genuine judgment, or earned autonomy.
 
 ## Why This Matters