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Co-authored-by: Jolien-S <142608800+Jolien-S@users.noreply.github.com>

Author: Jolien-S

tools/yoda/cost_access.qmd

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Costs and Getting Access
 
 ## How to request access
 ### New projects
-Requesting a project folder in Yoda is done via a 🔒 [request form on ServiceNow](https://services.vu.nl/esc?id=sc_cat_item&sys_id=20436ee397c6a910e553359fe153aff1).Please note that because there can be costs involved (see below) you need to supply a budget code.
+Requesting a project folder in Yoda is done via a 🔒 [request form on ServiceNow](https://services.vu.nl/esc?id=sc_cat_item&sys_id=20436ee397c6a910e553359fe153aff1). Please note that because there can be costs involved (see below) you need to supply a budget code.
 
 #### Intake procedure
 When you work with sensitive data we will always schedule a meeting with you to help you to safely work with your data.

tools/yoda/group_manager.qmd

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ If you are the group manager of a group, you will be able to add users to the gr
 
 If the user is external (no VU email address) they will receive an [invitation](./sram_invitations_eduid_activation.qmd) to join the SURF Research Access Management (SRAM) _Collaboration_ for external VU Yoda users. 
 
-Most users will be able to log in with their own institutional account, if their institute is not connected to SRAM they need to [create an **eduID (NL)** account](sram_invitations_eduid_activation.qmd#how-to-creating-eduid-throught-sram-invitation).
+Most users will be able to log in with their own institutional account; if their institute is not connected to SRAM they need to [create an **eduID (NL)** account](sram_invitations_eduid_activation.qmd#how-to-creating-eduid-throught-sram-invitation).
 
 By default, a new user will be a regular member of the group. If you want the user to be a member with read-only access or
 a group manager, see below for how to change users' roles.

tools/yoda/sram_invitations_eduid_activation.qmd

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ After you are added to a Yoda group by the admin or a colleague you will receive
 
 - If your institute is included in this list and if you are affiliated with a research or education organisation you can choose your institution name which will redirect you to your familiar institutional login page.
 
-- If your institute is not in this list or if you are not affiliated with a research or education organisation please choose **eduID** (NL). If you do not yet have an eduID you can create one for free, the system will guide you through the process. More information on eduID [here](https://login.eduid.nl/request/436c7382-bc00-45f0-b75e-2ede39b49445?lang=en)
+- If your institute is not in this list or if you are not affiliated with a research or education organisation please choose **eduID** (NL). If you do not yet have an eduID you can create one for free, the system will guide you through the process. More information on eduID is available on the [eduID page](https://login.eduid.nl/request/436c7382-bc00-45f0-b75e-2ede39b49445?lang=en)
 
 ![SRAM login with eduID](/public/tools/yoda/sramlogineduid.png)